Yours sincerely, Ayat Elawej

Dear Councillors,

I am writing to complain about the closure of Pitsmoor Adventure Playground. In my opinion I think that adventure playgrounds should not be closed down. The majority of kids in our school go to the Adventure Playground and do not want it to shut down.

Most children go to the Adventure Playground because it is somewhere where they can have fun and meet new friends. The Adventure Playground is not like any other park – it has many activities and children love to go there. Think of how they would feel if you close it down.

In addition to that, it is the safest place for kids to play in around their area. Also it will keep kids off the street, which will prevent them from a likely chance of becoming badly behaved. This could lead them to becoming criminals.

The Adventure Playground is a place where children can come without their parents. Their parents can always trust the staff to keep their children safe. As well as that, think of the staff of the Adventure Playground. They have a family and they need money to pay all the bills and buy food. How would they feel about it?

I hope you have raised your concern about the closure of Pitsmoor Adventure Playground. Please think about it.

Yours sincerely, Ayat Elawej

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